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Just for kicks I wrote a script for The Office. You can read the whole thing at http://www.defectiveyeti.com/theoffice/TheOffice-Personas.pdf.

I was inspired by two events, both of which took place in March. The first was an eight-hour Project Management seminar that I attended for work. At the end of the day I was reviewing my notes and realized I'd been handed an Office storyline.

The second was the series finale of Battlestar Galactica. As followers of The Office know, Dwight is a huge Battlestar fan, mentioning the program often.

I half-expected a subsequent episode of The Office to note the end of Battlestar, but it hasn't happened yet. Thus, I decided to write my own.

"Personas" is set around the time in season five of The Office when BSG ended. Specifically, it falls between "Golden Ticket" (S05E17) and "New Boss" (S05E18). In other words:

Andy is on staff.
Toby is back.
Ryan is missing (supposedly in Thailand).
No one in the office is in a relationship, except Jim / Pam (engaged) and Andy / Dwight (mortal enemies).
The Charles Miner / "Michael Scott Paper Company" storyline has not yet begun.

One last thing. Forty pages struck me as pretty long for a 30 minute show, but "E-Mail Surveillance" and "The Carpet"--the two scripts of The Office I could find online (at http://www.dailyscript.com/tv.html)--clock in at 44 and 43 pages respectively, so I used those as a guide. Having never before written a script for an existing show, I figured I'd stick to precedent.

Anyway, here's the teaser. I don't really plan to do anything with this (it was more of an exercise than anything else), but if you have any feedback I'd love to hear it. You can email me at matthewbaldwin@gmail.com.

Update: Someone asked if this contains BSG finale spoilers. Actually, it contains no BSG spoilers whatsoever, so go nuts.

The Office "Personas"

COLD OPEN INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - MORNING Michael is at the front of the room and the rest of the staff is paired up. Each group has a flipchart, on which they have jotted down descriptions of fictional people: names, ages, sexes, occupations, etc. PHYLLIS, paired with MEREDITH, is standing, addressing the room, wrapping up her presentation. PHYLLIS Gerald's primary paper needs are eight by eleven white bond for the printer and number 10 security envelopes. MICHAEL Excellent. Good work Phyllis. MICHAEL (V.O.) (CONT'D) Personas are a top-level project management tool used by business experts around the world. MICHAEL TALKING HEAD MICHAEL What you do is you make up characters and pretend that they are your customers. And then you ask them for advice on how to improve. And that way you don't have to talk to real customers. INT. CONFERENCE ROOM Dwight is completing his presentation. The flipchart looks like a Dungeon and Dragons character sheet, complete with stats on the left-hand side and a sketch of a barbarian. STANLEY, his partner, sits nearby, engrossed in his puzzle book. DWIGHT ... when in a beserker rage, Rivenheart can attack twice per round but is unable to defend. MICHAEL (exasperated) Dwight, you -- Missing the point. Why does your persona need paper? DWIGHT He doesn't need paper. His history is written in the lamentation of his enemies. MICHAEL Okay sit down. Just-- Sit down. Dwight does so as Michael wrestles with his irritation. MICHAEL (CONT'D) Who's next? Jim and Kevin. KEVIN looks at JIM with a giddy smile; Jim nods confidently. Kevin stands and gestures at his flipchart, on which he has written a series of bulletpoints describing his persona. KEVIN Our persona is "Mark L." His pronunciation of "Mark L." is almost identical to "Michael", and he pauses expectantly. When there's no reaction, he continues, struggling to maintain a straight face. KEVIN (CONT'D) Mark L. is in his mid-40's. Single, no family, no girlfriend. Dead-end job as regional manager in a dying industry. This guy is going nowhere. Titters around the room as people recognize the gag. They are laughing with Michael, assuming he'll catch on at any moment. KEVIN (CONT'D) He tells a lot of bad jokes. His favorite is short, but he knows how to use it. Jim hears his prearranged cue. JIM That's what she said! Michael laughs. MICHAEL Good one, Jim! Nicely done. Okay Kevin, let's keep this moving. Kevin looks uncertain. KEVIN He's always walking around the office interrupting people's work with pointless stories. Or insensitive remarks. About their weight. And baldness ... MICHAEL Ugch. Why would you even invent this guy? Kevin at a loss. Desperately trying to clue Michael in, he deviates from the flipchart. KEVIN Owns a "World's Best Boss" mug? Drives a Sebring? His birthday is March 15th? No, nothing? In a burst of inspiration, Jim leaps to his feet. JIM I think Mark L.'s worst trait is his utter lack of self-awareness. He wouldn't even recognize a description of himself. (beat; then slowly) Wouldn't even recognize a description ... of himself. Michael looks pensive for a moment, on the verge of realization. But then he shudders at his mental image of Mark and says: MICHAEL And what are his paper needs? KEVIN (to Jim; accusatory) You said this would be funny.

END COLD OPEN

You can read the whole thing as either a PDF (best) or as HTML (with some lost of formatting). An .fdr files is also available upon request. Enjoy.


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Thus, I decided to write my own. "Personas" is set around the time in season five of The Office when BSG ended. Specifically, it falls between "Golden Ticket" (S05E17) and "New Boss" (S05E18). In other words: Andy is on staff. Toby is back. Ryan is missing (supposedly in Thailand). No one in the office is in a relationship, except Jim / Pam (engaged) and Andy / Dwight (mortal enemies). The Charles Miner / "Michael Scott Paper Company" storyline has not yet begun. One last thing. Forty pages struck me as pretty long for a 30 minute show, but "E-Mail Surveillance" and "The Carpet"--the two scripts of The Office I could find online (at http://www.dailyscript.com/tv.html)--clock in at 44 and 43 pages respectively, so I used those as a guide. Having never before written a script for an existing show, I figured I'd stick to precedent. Anyway, here's the teaser. I don't really plan to do anything with this (it was more of an exercise than anything else), but if you have any feedback I'd love to hear it. You can email me at matthewbaldwin@gmail.com. Update: Someone asked if this contains BSG finale spoilers. Actually, it contains no BSG spoilers whatsoever, so go nuts. `The Office "Personas"` COLD OPEN INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - MORNING Michael is at the front of the room and the rest of the staff is paired up. Each group has a flipchart, on which they have jotted down descriptions of fictional people: names, ages, sexes, occupations, etc. PHYLLIS, paired with MEREDITH, is standing, addressing the room, wrapping up her presentation. PHYLLIS Gerald's primary paper needs are eight by eleven white bond for the printer and number 10 security envelopes. MICHAEL Excellent. Good work Phyllis. MICHAEL (V.O.) (CONT'D) Personas are a top-level project management tool used by business experts around the world. MICHAEL TALKING HEAD MICHAEL What you do is you make up characters and pretend that they are your customers. And then you ask them for advice on how to improve. And that way you don't have to talk to real customers. INT. CONFERENCE ROOM Dwight is completing his presentation. The flipchart looks like a Dungeon and Dragons character sheet, complete with stats on the left-hand side and a sketch of a barbarian. STANLEY, his partner, sits nearby, engrossed in his puzzle book. DWIGHT ... when in a beserker rage, Rivenheart can attack twice per round but is unable to defend. MICHAEL (exasperated) Dwight, you -- Missing the point. Why does your persona need paper? DWIGHT He doesn't need paper. His history is written in the lamentation of his enemies. MICHAEL Okay sit down. Just-- Sit down. Dwight does so as Michael wrestles with his irritation. MICHAEL (CONT'D) Who's next? Jim and Kevin. KEVIN looks at JIM with a giddy smile; Jim nods confidently. Kevin stands and gestures at his flipchart, on which he has written a series of bulletpoints describing his persona. KEVIN Our persona is "Mark L." His pronunciation of "Mark L." is almost identical to "Michael", and he pauses expectantly. When there's no reaction, he continues, struggling to maintain a straight face. KEVIN (CONT'D) Mark L. is in his mid-40's. Single, no family, no girlfriend. Dead-end job as regional manager in a dying industry. This guy is going nowhere. Titters around the room as people recognize the gag. They are laughing with Michael, assuming he'll catch on at any moment. KEVIN (CONT'D) He tells a lot of bad jokes. His favorite is short, but he knows how to use it. Jim hears his prearranged cue. JIM That's what she said! Michael laughs. MICHAEL Good one, Jim! Nicely done. Okay Kevin, let's keep this moving. Kevin looks uncertain. KEVIN He's always walking around the office interrupting people's work with pointless stories. Or insensitive remarks. About their weight. And baldness ... MICHAEL Ugch. Why would you even invent this guy? Kevin at a loss. Desperately trying to clue Michael in, he deviates from the flipchart. KEVIN Owns a "World's Best Boss" mug? Drives a Sebring? His birthday is March 15th? No, nothing? In a burst of inspiration, Jim leaps to his feet. JIM I think Mark L.'s worst trait is his utter lack of self-awareness. He wouldn't even recognize a description of himself. (beat; then slowly) Wouldn't even recognize a description ... of himself. Michael looks pensive for a moment, on the verge of realization. But then he shudders at his mental image of Mark and says: MICHAEL And what are his paper needs? KEVIN (to Jim; accusatory) You said this would be funny. `END COLD OPEN` You can read the whole thing as either a PDF (best) or as HTML (with some lost of formatting). An .fdr files is also available upon request. Enjoy. 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